friendship of equal lengths
melts buttery and sideways
over life's plate
lingering in the crevices
quietly accepting syrup
nudging fate, stubbornly
refusing to mix
with love's fuzzy warmth
Wednesday, February 23, 2005
January 15th
One year ago today I began to eat differently. It is called the Ketogenic diet and the information is out there for free ...
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I'll have a double stack of pancakes, please.
Comment from theresarrt7 - 3/4/05 12:28 AM
Hey, I`ve seen this! Wonderful!
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Comment from deabvt - 2/27/05 12:28 PM
This is lovely. I read it several times and I pondered it quite awhile. I would like a signed copy of your book :-)!! xox
Comment from valphish - 2/24/05 7:03 AM
I love this!
~JerseyGirl
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Comment from cneinhorn - 2/23/05 6:14 PM
intriguing.
a friendship without love?
I don't know why, but this poem reminds me
of, marriage. You know, when two people who
love eachother get mad at one another.
They get stubborn, refusing to budge.
love can't live there.
sad.
Comment from babyshark28 - 2/23/05 9:08 AM
STILL wanting to see a book of your poetry in a bookstore. Hugs, hon. *Barb*
Comment from barbpinion - 2/23/05 8:58 AM
Great metaphor. Made me hungry. Made me think. Lisa :-]
Comment from mlraminiak - 2/23/05 7:29 AM
I kind of feel like that today. And the only answer to it is Pancakes smothered in that warm syrup to fill those angry crevices of mine.
Comment from gypsytrader49 - 2/23/05 6:20 AM
It's terrific! What an awesome journal you've created here. I have missed reading your entries, but hope to catch up soon.
ReplyDeleteHehe,
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Sarah McLaughlin
"You`re love is sweeter than Chocolate".
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