BUTTERMILK

friendship of equal lengths

melts buttery and sideways

over life's plate

lingering in the crevices

quietly accepting syrup

nudging fate, stubbornly

refusing to mix

with love's fuzzy warmth









Wednesday, February 23, 2005
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2006 at 5:31 PM

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    I'll have a double stack of pancakes, please.
    Comment from theresarrt7 - 3/4/05 12:28 AM



    Hey, I`ve seen this! Wonderful!
    V
    Comment from deabvt - 2/27/05 12:28 PM



    This is lovely. I read it several times and I pondered it quite awhile. I would like a signed copy of your book :-)!! xox
    Comment from valphish - 2/24/05 7:03 AM



    I love this!

    ~JerseyGirl
    http://journals.aol.com/cneinhorn/WonderGirl


    Comment from cneinhorn - 2/23/05 6:14 PM



    intriguing.
    a friendship without love?
    I don't know why, but this poem reminds me
    of, marriage. You know, when two people who
    love eachother get mad at one another.
    They get stubborn, refusing to budge.
    love can't live there.
    sad.
    Comment from babyshark28 - 2/23/05 9:08 AM



    STILL wanting to see a book of your poetry in a bookstore. Hugs, hon. *Barb*
    Comment from barbpinion - 2/23/05 8:58 AM



    Great metaphor. Made me hungry. Made me think. Lisa :-]
    Comment from mlraminiak - 2/23/05 7:29 AM



    I kind of feel like that today. And the only answer to it is Pancakes smothered in that warm syrup to fill those angry crevices of mine.
    Comment from gypsytrader49 - 2/23/05 6:20 AM

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  2. Barb PinionFebruary 7, 2006 at 7:02 PM

    It's terrific! What an awesome journal you've created here. I have missed reading your entries, but hope to catch up soon.

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  3. VFebruary 11, 2006 at 11:10 AM

    Hehe,
    Reminds me of Sarah McLaughlin
    "You`re love is sweeter than Chocolate".
    V

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