i found one of your ideas
swimming in my bathtub early
this morning.... it froliced
as i wondered from whence it had come.
so perfectly round
so obvious as i lifted the lever
draining away the pain with
a gurgled wave~quickly i began
to scour the soap ring off my heart.
very intersting. always so interesting. I like poems that seem abstract to me, like I have to find the symbolism.
ReplyDeletevery good!
Comment from babyshark28 - 8/3/04 10:20 PM
okay, I've read this one four times now. It is growing on me--loving 'gurgled wave' and 'scour the soap ring off my heart.'
I plundered both kat and you for 'ku. It just... occurred to me.
Comment from merelyp - 7/23/04 9:22 PM