Thursday, July 22, 2004
Ode to a best Friend
i found one of your ideas

swimming in my bathtub early

this morning.... it froliced

as i wondered from whence it had come.

so perfectly round

so obvious as i lifted the lever

draining away the pain with

a gurgled wave~quickly i began

to scour the soap ring off my heart.





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Very deep and interesting. I love how this is laid out. You're so talented poetically.
Comment from wildflower121764 - 7/28/04 6:07 PM



More great stuff!!! :-) ---Robbie
Comment from krobbie67 - 7/27/04 8:07 PM



Very nice, Christina...but sad... Lisa :-]
Comment from mlraminiak - 7/23/04 9:59 PM



Chris, that was great!! Wonderful imagery!
V
Comment from deabvt - 7/23/04 6:15 AM



You're good
Thanks for sharing.
Comment from readmereadyou - 7/22/04 10:02 PM