inside me

deep within me
lies a shield
of warmth
that touches
the edges of
my skin

I have never
really seen it
this shimmery
veil of love
that God put
deep inside me

but I believe
in it anyway
deep breaths feed
the hunger of this
thing, this thing
I call soul








(sometimes my thoughts look like poems, but they aren't really poems)
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11 comments:

  1. VMay 2, 2006 at 5:03 PM

    Well, this one is a beauty!
    Hugs,
    V

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  2. LouisianaMay 2, 2006 at 5:19 PM

    well your thoughts are poetic alright...what beautiful expressions...

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  3. KristinaMay 2, 2006 at 5:22 PM

    splended

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  4. Tammy BrierlyMay 2, 2006 at 5:53 PM

    Beautiful!

    XXOO

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  5. lorileoMay 2, 2006 at 10:10 PM

    I feel your faith...
    xoxo

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  6. AnonymousMay 3, 2006 at 6:04 AM

    Your thoughts as expressed are poetic. So to me they are poems. Beautiful.

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  7. AnonymousMay 3, 2006 at 6:05 AM

    Shall I call all I read of you poems? That is my comment above as well. Spencer

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  8. Jod{i}May 3, 2006 at 1:16 PM

    I understand...

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  9. Bedazzzled1May 3, 2006 at 6:25 PM

    Maybe poetry, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder. And this beholder sees a poem and a beautiful person who wrote it.

    ::hug and smooch::
    Nikki

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  10. JaimeMay 4, 2006 at 4:47 PM

    That is beautiful!! Sorry I have not been around in a while. Busy, busy, busy. Now that I am back, we should do lunch! I hope you are doing well. Please take care of yourself. Jaime

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  11. TamaraMay 5, 2006 at 7:39 AM

    Sweetie this is beautiful! I'd say it's poetry in thought motion...

    Love,

    Mom

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