
On the beaches of my soul
your foot prints wander still
left in the sand of my heart
on one side of the country
this would be a rising sun
but to me, it is always setting
on the memory of your early
death, robbing your dreams
killing your family from the roots up
to me the ocean taste not
so much of salt, but of tears
and laughter for it is there
that we spent our youth
I miss you or maybe it is us
I miss the possibilities of what ifs
and should haves float endlessly
work in progress.......not finished or officially submitted yet.
Wow, that is wonderful...not finish you say? how can that get any better...
ReplyDeleteYou and Jodi are such wonderful writters...Poets of first rate in my books...
Hope you are okay...and that your kids, isn't lovely to say that?, are doing well...Hugs..
This is a beautiful poem for a beautiful soul. You will see Holly again one day. I just know that you will.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Mom
I like it!!
ReplyDeleteThat is beautiful Christina. I am sorry for your loss. I agree with your mom...you will see her again! Please take care. I hope you and the kids are doing well. Jaime
ReplyDeleteThe thought is complete and beautifully stated. Lovely
ReplyDeleteSpencer
Could it be any more perfect? Knowing you, you will astound me with further changes to a poem I find superb.
ReplyDeleteI miss you so much, Christina. But, I am happy for you...happy for the reasons why you are not around as often.
::big hugs and a smooch::
Nikki Ü
...but it is lovely. And thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful homage.
ReplyDeleteHugs,
V