10-13-66 to 5-26-86, Holly Kay Hoopingarner


On the beaches of my soul
your foot prints wander still

left in the sand of my heart


on one side of the country
this would be a rising sun

but to me, it is always setting

on the memory of your early
death, robbing your dreams

killing your family from the roots up


to me the ocean taste not
so much
of salt, but of tears
and laughter
for it is there

that we spent our youth

I miss you or maybe it is us
I miss
the possibilities of what ifs

and
should haves float endlessly




work in progress.......not finished or officially submitted yet.

8 comments:

  1. Wow, that is wonderful...not finish you say? how can that get any better...

    You and Jodi are such wonderful writters...Poets of first rate in my books...

    Hope you are okay...and that your kids, isn't lovely to say that?, are doing well...Hugs..

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  2. This is a beautiful poem for a beautiful soul. You will see Holly again one day. I just know that you will.

    Love,

    Mom

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  3. That is beautiful Christina. I am sorry for your loss. I agree with your mom...you will see her again! Please take care. I hope you and the kids are doing well. Jaime

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  4. The thought is complete and beautifully stated. Lovely

    Spencer

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  5. Could it be any more perfect? Knowing you, you will astound me with further changes to a poem I find superb.

    I miss you so much, Christina. But, I am happy for you...happy for the reasons why you are not around as often.

    ::big hugs and a smooch::
    Nikki Ü

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  6. ...but it is lovely. And thoughtful.

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  7. A beautiful homage.
    Hugs,
    V

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