a delicate sliver
of health hangs
dangling from
silk promises of
tomorrow's deceit
like a web jewel
waiting the care
of the widow's
eight black feet
that save me
of health hangs
dangling from
silk promises of
tomorrow's deceit
like a web jewel
waiting the care
of the widow's
eight black feet
that save me
beautiful!
ReplyDeleteJodi
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Comment from jouell3935 - 1/14/05 6:03 PM
like a web jewel...i love that line.
very good :)
Comment from babyshark28 - 1/12/05 10:19 PM
Perfectly balanced metaphor.
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Comment from deabvt - 1/9/05 3:32 AM